Mister Crimson
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Mister Crimson is the story of a pulp-era superhero that has been abducted through time. Taken from the 1930s, and sent 200 years into the future he is forced to take up fisticuffs against a rebellion that hopes to overthrow the city's leaders. Mister Crimson is used to scraping his knuckles on shifty criminal types-- but here, he is forced to take on mutants and cyborgs who have powers that match his own. But Crimson was selected for this task specifically. His futuristic handlers know that in a word, he is unbreakable.
Fighting criminals has always been Crimson's bag-- but soon he realizes this future is not what it seems. The city leaders are corrupt, and those mutants and cyborgs that have been branded as malcontents, are actually fighting the just cause. Does Crimson join them? Or does he continue to fight for the men who have the ability to send home?
Crimson left the past at the worst possible moment. His arch-nemesis, Ace of Spades, had finally deduced his secret identity, and kidnapped Crimson's wife and son. Crimson had found Ace, and their final encounter had just begun when Crimson was snatched into his future.
Mister Crimson faces his biggest dilemma. Does he quell the rebellion, and earn his ticket back in time to save his family? Or does he do what he has always done-- fight the good fight to protect the innocent? Even for a man that has no limits to his strength and invulnerability, this adventure could break him.
Thanks so much for your comments! For anyone who's interested in reading more Mister Crimson, the series is updated every Tuesday and can be read at Flashback Universe: http://www.flashbackuniverse.com/MrCrimson/viewmap.aspx?qsPageNum=0
I honestly would say that this is probably the best comic I've seen on Zuda. Quite frankly, Mister Crimson kicks serious arse...
i like your style!
I don't know why this comic does not continue to be updated, it has good art, the story looks like it could be interesting, and the character of Mr. Crimson is pretty cool. I don't know why the artist/creator doesn't continue to put stuff out someone at Zuda should contact him and others that have very good comics but only put out one issue.
Great News, will check it out. (I never read the comments until I comment 1st)
Great One. I always liked the old Golden Age lookin Guys like Mr. Crimson. Has the feel of some of my old faves. Enjoyed it. There should be more of this.
Hi Everyone,
Just a quick note to let you all know that Mister Crimson found a new home at Flashback Universe.
It's a weekly webcomic, updated every Tuesday, and it's new run starts off today!
It can be read here: www.flashbackuniverse.com/mrcrimson
blackking / Edward: Thanks for taking the time to comment, much appreciated!
Too bad this won't be getting updated here, since it didn't win its competition. Great strip. I love mixing genres so having a pulp character thrust into a sci-fi world is awesome.
When are they going to add to this comic it looks like it could be very interesting?
Thanks so much, Everyone, for your comments/support/votes during the contest, much appreciated!!!
Mr. Crimson is absolutely cool. His design is original and captivating. I have already stated that time travel...especially to the future...is never for me. I realize this is just personal preference. With that said, this is only eight frames and the foundational character elements are solid and the art is fantastic. I would gladly indulge a time travel plot to observe and learn more about this fascinating character. If Mr. Crimson does not win and you continue the series somewhere, please leave us directions to Mr. Crimson's web address as many of us are hooked.
Amazing!
Thanks! We'll try to avoid the burgers and go for the tri-tip!
Greetings, my friends! I predict that a Zuda barbecue is going to take place on October the 26th on Tampa, Florida! Sadly, the hamburguers will have a dubious origin so half the attendees will get food poisoning! Farewell!
Cris, is there a Zuda barbecue in our future?!
Criswell is correct, but Victor is wrong.
I have made a serious accusation against DUAL, go to its comments and read it! It is important!
Greetings, my friends! I predict that this comic will lose, but Mr. Tripodi will eventually win on 2009, with an entry called "Ed, the Dentist Horse". I also foresee a specially cold October the 26th in Tampa, Florida. Farewell!
the synopsis is rad and i'm a little disappointed by the story of the 8 frames. the art, however, is quite enjoyable. probably not my thing this time around, but good luck!
Not for me.
this is really a remarkable piece of work. it looks like you probably won't win, and that's a shame. this is another one of those pieces that just may be to classy for this joint, like (IMHO) The Crooked Man, or Untrue Tales).
I would pay to read this in a printed graphic novel, and i would pay big. This is EXTREMELY well done. I really want more. i haven't gotten excited by any of the competitors in a few months it seems, but this really speaks to me.
damn, damn, damn fine work.
To my eyes, this is the toughest competition yet. Mister Crimson is flat out AWESOME. Really a lot of fun. You guys should be proud. This is a favorite and a 5 star. But how do I choose?? How do I choose??
Thanks so much, Everybody, for your comments!
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@Matthew: The competition isn't over yet! We're trying to be dramatic here...!
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@RiverHelix: BIG thanks for your thoughtful critique & 4-stars! :)
BAD ASS!
Diego, you said Mister Crimson would rise. IT HASN'T!!! YOU LIED!!! Sob...
Page 1 - Nice art. Interesting characters. "Ace" is established as a pyschopath who will murder someone just to draw attention. Crimson is shown to be a detective in the Holmes mode. It looks like he might have a floating ability?? At this point I wondered if he might be supernatural, like a ghost or spectre.
One quibble - the death is NOT a random John Doe, "Ace" chose his victim for a specific reason.
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Page 2 - Melodrama much? "So says Mr. Crimson" is kinda over the top, but what the hey, it's your character. But...
Crimson was expecting Ace to kidnap his family? For years? Well, why didn't he protect them a bit better then!!!!
Anyway, on page 1 he chats casually about a recent murder with the murderer, then segues here to his missing family.
I dunno, but I think that might be topic number one for most people. Hmm, Crimson may be more than a bit psycho himself...
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Page 3 - After his dramatic threat, Crimson patiently stands, grimly silent, as his foe delivers his monologue. Now don't get me wrong, I like Ace, and what he says is probably important character info, but wouldn't most worried fathers have started the finger breaking by now?
"I'll stop just as soon as my beautiful family is safe."
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Page 4 - A detective as smart as Crimson had no doubt already discerned that his pills had disappeared along with his family, and is just lulling Ace into a false sense of security. Though why, I do not know.
Quibble 2 - I think what Crimson no longer has is a REASON to hold back. An EXCUSE is what you give when you do something wrong, and Crimson has been doing good, at least by his lights, in not killing Ace up to now.
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Well, anyway, 4 pages is enough critique. I like the idea here, but things I might overlook in a free-standing comic just start to be more problematic in a competition. When I'm trying to decide if X is better than Y, anything that jars is not going to help. And much as I wanted to like this, I kept getting jarred.
I do enjoy a nice bit of genre blending. Good job!
Dear Zuda Competitors/Creators,
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Thanks!
... Right up my street. All you need do is drop in some fantastic anachronism and I'll be enjoying this as much as Sky Captain and the World of Tomorrow. What? ...
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Want to know more? http://www.mpd57.blogspot.com and that'll be Mr. mpd57 to you.
Great art
Great artwork, and nice power... but the 3:24 AM thing at the end seems a bit contrived. "No longer of any consequence"? C'mon. They'd tell him what happened to them. If they get through it they'd say and if there removing him means they don't then they would have shown up later or earlier in his timeline. C'mon.
And if there are "reasons" for all that, then I sorta think those might be contrived, too...
this is pretty damn good.
@Diego- no love for me?!? My thoughtful critique & 4-stars?
@Gabe: That's very relative, it all depends on what's in the script, really. I guess the average would be one page per day. Page 6 and 7, for example, were drawn in the same night.
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@hairballOne, Vekesh, ScottM, Brother D: Thanks for the support!!!
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@Matthew: Love, Lust and a Giant Killer Turtle must have more votes.
How does this work out---Mr. Crimson has
1) More views
2) More favourites
3) And a better rating than Love, Lust and a Giant Killer Turtle yet it's two places below it!
Go Diego GO!!!
I love the look and feel of this strip. The un-inked pencils bring such a warmth to the artwork. Very engageing character, I look forward to his futre adventures :]
Thats one cool synopsis you have there.
Great texture and color in the artwork. Love the pacing of the story, the twist at the end really hooks. I'm on board with this one.
Those scientists looked like *******. Well, I didn't love this strip, but I didn't hate it either. The way that Ace spoke was pretty distracting, and then you just threw him out, anyway, so... Maybe next time.
This one is the toughest to critique. The art definitely had that throwback style. But man, Ace was talking coooooold-**** to MC on page 3. And the best MC could come back with was, "Now I don't have an excuse to hold back." Pa-leeze. I'm not too familiar with pulp-style comics but do villains talk that much trash in them?!? I take it that Ace has been dragged into the future w/ MC? This comic isn't particularly my flavor but the art style fits the story well, and it had good pacing. Overall, a good read. I took humor in Ace's more contemporary trash-talking which counterbalanced MC's stiff, 'ole skool' hero speech. I'm sure for those that do love the pulp/retro style, will vibe to the twist you put on this genre. G'Job and G'Luck Brother.
Don Diego,
in keeping with Rob's questions, how long does it take for you to complete a full page (pencils, layouts, colors, etc.)?
-gabe
We're only creating suspense here... Mister Crimson will rise!
NOOOO! IT'S DROPPED TO 5!!!
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated!
Not enough going on here to really catch my interest.
@BlaqueSaber: Thanks for the nice words, glad to hear you're enjoying this series!
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@Vero: Gracias por unirte a la campaña!
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@passive: I'm looking forward to meeting them as well!
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@frequentcontributor: Pages 9 to 59 of this comic will feature the scientists' secret origin tale. Thanks for checking the comic!
@Rob: The main difference between Crimson and Eden is the way we're telling these stories. Eden was done before the very first round of Zuda competitors started, so we built that story thinking that it would have had to work with a one weekly page update, so we developed this storytelling method that we felt was a good fit for that schedule, and particularly a good fit for a character like Eden. I guess that series was a bit on the "experimental" side, and it seemed like many readers felt left out of it. So that whole experience made us want to approach Mister Crimson in a more traditional way.
Another decision we made, was to get rid of this "sinister" feel that Pieces of Eden had, which of course was very important for that series. I find things to enjoy in most (or all) genres, and I guess Seth probably feels the same way about this, so from the beginning we agreed that we wanted this comic to be fun. That wasn't a hard decision to make.
Visually, one of the biggest decisions for me was not to work with ink. I had been experimenting with working with digitally colored pencils for a few months, and when we started talking about this series, it felt like this style was suitable for this comic, so I decided to stick with it.
@Pierre: Thanks for the support!
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@king: Thanks for the feedback, you definitely made an interesting point here. Seth already wrote a better response to your comment, and I would like to add that while we did take a look at the pulps (amongst other stuff), that was more like an starting point to build the series. And that's it. I think that doing everything the same way it has been done wouldn't have been interesting. To make a music analogy, I love the Ramones, but I couldn't care less about all the Ramones clones or cover bands that are out there. I hope that makes sense.